5月15日雅思大作文真题参考范文 I 保持身体健康是为社会还是为个人?

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2021年5月15雅思大作文题目

People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they

live, rather than their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?

范文及解析

Introduction

When health problems of the public are turning into a social concern, many

deem that individuals, as a member of the community, should maintain their

health in terms of fulfilling one of their social obligations instead of reaping

their own benefits. From my perspective, I tend to think otherwise.

【解析】

注意题干中的rather than(而不是)，意味着这个观点是认为“take care of their health”只是“a duty to

the

society”。我们站其对立面时，可以是认为保持健康“只”和个人相关，也可站在“与个人和社会均有关”。曾有类似题目问的是“个人保持健康应该是个人负责还是政府负责”，要区分这两个问题的差异。

Concession ; Refutation

Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to perform their social duty by

leading a healthy life. This is mainly because as a member of society, one

throughout his or her entire life usually enjoys the social welfare, especially

in health care, such as footing part of the medical bills, offering free

vaccinations, and investing in medical research for the sake of bettering

people’s well-being. In return, it naturally follows that citizens should assume

their responsibility to repay the community by at least not putting extra burden

on the corridors of power. In other words, citizens should facilitate the

reduction of financial cost in medical field, and thus stay healthy to this end.

However, this is an incomplete part of the whole picture, which indicates that

individuals should adopt healthy habits not only for social duties but also for

their personal benefits.

【解析】

以社会公民的身份享受社会带来福利的同时，人们也应该有责任回报社会，起码不要给社会的医疗系统增加额外负担。但是，这不是事件的全貌，意味着人们同时也得从个人利益出发。

Argument

As a matter of fact, aiming at reaping one’s own benefits is more likely to

enable him or her to secure a sound physique. Such is human nature that people

usually have every reason to negotiate the impediments and fulfil the goal for

their own sake, with a sense of social responsibility being too abstract to

serve as the motivation. A typical example is what happened in China at the

beginning of 2020 when the nightmarish pandemic – COVID-19 – impacted. Why did

most Chinese citizens conform to a series of policies issued by the government

and stay at home for months during the lockdown? The answer may be the social

obligation of helping alleviate the tension, but a more real response to this

question is human’s innate fear of suffering from the torture of diseases,

physically and mentally.

【解析】

人的本性使然，当出于个人利益，更可能完成保持健康这件事，最终达到个人和社会都获益的共赢结果。回想2020年初，为什么大多数国人会乖乖接受封城隔离等一系列措施?是社会责任感，也更是对病痛乃至死亡的恐惧。

Conclusion

To sum up, it is much easier for citizens to stay healthy for the purpose

of deriving their own benefits, which further secures a win-win result for both

individuals and the society.

【解析】

一句话总结