7月9日雅思大作文7分范文-儿童广告是好还是坏?

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There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and

other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim

that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give

your own opinion.

在一些国家，广告商增加广告的数量，试图说服孩子们买零食、玩具和其他商品。父母反对给孩子施加这样的压力。但一些广告主声称，这些广告中有有用的信息。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

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思路解析：

本题为彻底的旧题。问题的关键是：儿童广告是好还是坏?父母们认为儿童广告给孩子造成了压力，广告商说儿童广告提供了有用的信息。看起来，双方都有道理，那么，你该持什么观点呢?

此类题目的双方观点不是互相排斥的(mutually

exclusive)，因此我们一般可讨论双方的观点，然后来一个中间道路：儿童广告的确给儿童带来了各种压力(主体论述段1)，但也有好处(主体论述段2)，因此，我们应该支持那种既带来好处同时又避免坏处的儿童广告(结论段)。

参考范文：

Advertisements aimed at children can be seen everywhere these days: TV,

newspapers and magazines, Internet. Many people believe they should be banned

because of their negative effects on children. While these advertisements do

have some benefits - they are informative at least, I am quite convinced that

they are more harmful than beneficial to children.

In the first place, in order to attract children, many advertisers tend to

overemphasise the "fun side" of their products. More often than not they will

promote such products as computer games, dolls, animal parks and so on. I admit

these stuff may be important to children, yet too much of them would distract

children from their study. Even when they are advertising learning-aid products,

the advertisers often claim their products will make children's learning process

full of fun. This is really bad because it gives children a false impression

that they do not have to put serious efforts into their study. In addition,

children advertising is not desirable because it often leads children to buying

things that they do not really need. That is why many parents complain that

their children do not buy anything but those expensive "famous brands" such as

Adidas, Nike and the like.

At the same time, children advertising is partly responsible for children

being kept away from the reality. Catering to the psychological needs of

children, many advertisements describe the world in highly imaginative and

unrealistic manners. For instance, when they want to promote their doll weapons,

they will describe the world as a place full of bad guys. A child exposed to

such advertising may develop a deep sense of hostility to the world. On the

other hand, when they want to sell entertainment park tickets to children, they

will describe the world as a place full of love and without any danger at all. A

child who has been made to believe this kind of advertising will have a hard

time when they come across troubles in real life.

To conclude, since most children advertisements are misleading, they are

really harmful to children who are not old enough to tell the difference between

imagination and reality. Indeed, these advertisements may provide useful

information for children, but these information can be obtained from other more

reliable sources. Therefore, I hold the strong opinion that children advertising

be banned.

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