雅思G类小作文范文--建议信

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Task：

You have finished management course. You want to give some suggestions about

the course.

Write a letter to the director. In your letter

1) describe what your opinion about the course is

2) tell the director what your suggestion is

Sample answer：

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Dear Mr. Clinton,

I hope that this unintended letter would not surprise you. I used to study in

your school, and this letter is basically concerned about some courses I had

been through. It is too bad some problems occurred. Otherwise, I was very

satisfied with my learning experience there.

The management course is generally satisfactory. I have been especially

impressed with the book the lecturer had recommended. I am convinced that what I

learnt from the courses is of great use to my job.

However, it has come to my attention that some of your lecturers are so young

that they seem to have deficient experience in the field of management. They

should connect those theories with the real world. In light of my long history

as an on-the-job training participant, I trust that your school can manage to

improve this situation. Those lecturers are undoubtedly aspiring, dedicated and

responsible, but I personally suggest that they can undergo more practical

training, and learn more about the application of theories.

Thanks a lot for your concern. I am looking forward to improvement, although

I am no longer your student.

Yours sincerely,

Ryan