2017年5月13日雅思写作考试小作文真题范文:地图题
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The diagrams shows a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.Describe
the difference and compare them if possible.
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The two pictures compare the difference of a museum in two years, namely,
1990 and 2010.
地图题第一段改写题目。
In 1990, on the eastern part of the path, next to the exit, there was a small
garden with some trees and a large rectangular car park, which was almost twice
the size of the small garden, was located on the northern of the small garden.
On the other side, beside the exit, a cottage lied to the western part of the

path with a small shop and an irregular exhibition located to the north of it. A
small storage was located to the north of the exhibition. Apart from these, in
the northernmost part of the museum was a large garden full of trees from east
to west.
第二段介绍1990年的设施,注意顺序,本段先介绍了小路的东面再介绍了小路的西面,最后介绍了贯穿东西的一个大花园。
By 2010, several changes had taken place, except for the large garden and the
path, which remained unchanged. On the eastern part of the path, the small
garden was demolished and the car park was expanded. On the other side, the
cottage was replaced by a coffee shop. The exhibition and shop remained the same
position but shop extended and exhibition was reduced to three fourth of its
original size. Another significant change is that the storage also extended to
against the wall of the garden.
第三段重点介绍到了2010年,什么设施没变,什么设施变了,变成什么样子。注意,顺序仍然是要重点把握的!本段先介绍了两个没变的,大花园和小路。然后还是先介绍小路的东面,再介绍了西面,哪些设施变了,和上一段的顺序保持一致。
During this period, the facilities inside the museum had changed
significantly.
最后一段,总结全文。
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