9分考官级雅思大作文范文之社区精神的丢失

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本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是In many cities an increasing number of people do not know

their neighbours and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the

causes of this problem? How can it be

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9分范文：

One disturbing trend nowadays is the weakened sense of community in our

cities. The two principal causes of this are in my view how our schools and

shopping habits have changed. In this essay I discuss these problems and also

how they might be solved to ensure we once again know our neighbours.

There is a clear connection between education and community. In the past

people got to know their neighbours through their children and formed close

bonds watching them play sport together or just helping out with childcare.

Unfortunately, this connection has been broken in cities by allowing children to

go any school and not the one in the neighbourhood with the effect that local

children do not necessarily go to the same school. The easy solution to this

problem would simply be to make sure that children in cities went to the local

school in their district.

The change in shopping habits has also had a profound effect on community

relations in cities. In the past people would shop at their local market or main

street, but now they increasingly use supermarkets that are located on the edge

of cities. This means that people no longer meet people who live in their

neighbourhood as they go shopping and it has also led to a loss in community

identity. The best way to solve this problem would be for the government to

raise taxation on the large supermarkets and to reduce it for local businesses

in order to bring back local markets and shops.

In conclusion I believe that the best way for governments to address the

problem of loss of community spirit in cities would be to introduce measures

that encouraged people to educate their children locally and to help more local

businesses and shops to flourish.