2017年5月20日雅思大作文真题范文:控制犯罪

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television

in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do

you agree or disagree?影视中的暴力情节需要管控，以减少社会里的暴力犯罪。

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It is undeniable that mass media generate significant impacts on public

thoughts and behaviors, therefore violent scenes in movies or TV series are

blamed for the rising crime rate in society. In order to resolve this social

issue, some citizens propose that it is the government that should regulate the

amount of violence in those programs.

People advocating this statement do have a good point. Even though there is

no scientific evidence, it is common sense that being exposed to a plenty of

criminal wrongdoings portrayed in films contributes to impulsive crimes. What’s

worse, offenders even learn criminal means from the movies, such as how to kill

victims in one shoot as well as how to abuse the hostage in most cruelest way.

It is also worth mentioning that adolescents who are at the age which features

the strong ability of imitation and a lack of awareness of abiding by laws tend

to go astray or be involved in organized crimes. Obviously, under such a

circumstance, there is no doubt that the authority must shoulder the obligation

to censor those films or TV programs which contain explicit scenes of violence.

In China, this practice is strictly implemented and does serve the purpose of

diminishing the number of crime incidents, especially in metropolis.

Conversely, it is understandable that government’s interference exploits the

right of free speech that should be granted to every individual. In other words,

directors or scriptwriters are the ones who determine the plot and the best form

to express the essence of their works. However, as Thomas Hobbes (a British

politician and philosopher ) explained that the attainment of liberty is based

on the guarantee of common benefits, so this view does not withstood the

scrutiny.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned rigorous censorship should be

enforced by government so as to reduce the amount of violence in mass media.

Besides, large-scale educational campaigns aimed at enhancing public awareness

of obeying laws and regulations are supposed to be launched. Only in this way,

can the social security be strengthened.

(343 words)范文原创自易伯华教研范钰红老师