支招雅思小作文 | 地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变

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【类型】地图(非数据型图表)

【细分】改建(removal、replacements、additions)

【写作视角】“上帝视角”。注意：题图题的主体部分有三种视角(对应三种写作思路)：1)上帝视角(即俯视，当成平面图写);2)访客视角(即进入建筑或场地内部，以访客视线，按照线路图写);3)混合视角(即前两种视角混合着用)。老章不常用纯粹的上帝视角写，这一篇从而值得注意学习这种视角的写法。

# Introduction

The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center

based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility

will have greater versatility.

开头段，固定操作。说明图的主题，以及描述变化后的突出特点。

# Body

The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports

shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the

premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward.

The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain

the way they are.

主体部分第 一段：按照图中箭头的指向，先描述一进门的区域的变化，从变化最 大的部分开始，进而写到变化小或者没有变化的部分。

Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now

independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its

replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The

east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where

it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the

seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that

will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room

– adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.

主体部分第二段：视线转向至东西方向的区域。与上一段的思路相同，先写变化大的地方后写变化小的地方。注意：需要通过一些连接词向考官展示写作的逻辑顺序。

# Conclusion

With the planned changes, the sports center will be more

multi-functional.

今日福利

《绝望主妇》讲述的是四位不同类型中产阶级家庭妻子的故事，地道美国中产阶级表达方式。

这部剧最 大的特色在于旁白，这个旁白就像开了上帝视角，带我们走进每个人的内心世界，在学英语的同时，给我们一些生活上的启发。