10月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 团队运动好还是个人运动好?
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2021年10月9雅思大作文题目
Some people think that it is beneficial to take part in sports which are
played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual
sports is better, like swimming.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
高分范文及解析
01、Usually, when people talk about the benefits of sports, they are
referring to physical ones. However, sport is essential for more than just that,
and in this regard, we can gain from both team and individual sports, though the
benefits differ vastly.
02、There are, irrefutably, immense benefits that exist by playing team

sports such as football and baseball. Firstly, whether or not the team results
can outperform other team outcomeshinges on the entire team rather than on a
single member. This means that no matter the talent level, every participant
must rely on teammates, which promotes the virtue of working together. Without a
group of players simultaneously training cooperatively towards the same goal,
the team performance will falter. Another benefit is that players are usually
highly adaptable. This is because they have to acclimate themselves regularly
when facing the constant influx of new participants, especially in schools where
seniors graduate every year.
解析
* 团队体育的好处:培养合作精神、培养适应力。
* outperform 做得比…好
* hinge on 取决于
* falter 衰退
* acclimate 使适应
03、On the other hand, being a lone wolf is a challenge but can foster other
qualities. To be more precise, athletes will learn to be self-reliant on solo
sports. They can neither count on other teammates carrying them in competition
nor blame anyone else for the failure, and this teaches them to pull out all
stops when being coached and when playing in the game. Besides, since success
and failure are the player himself to bear, those public glories and stumbles
give him thicker skin. Therefore, these athletes are more likely to feel
comfortable performing individually in front of a crowd, which is essential for
their school and work presentations.
解析
* 个人体育的好处:更自力更生、心理更强大
* a lone wolf 单独行动者
* foster 培养
* self-reliant 自力更生的
* pull out all stops 全力以赴
* glories and stumbles 荣誉和挫折
04、In conclusion, team and individual sports challenge participants in
different ways, from which every participant can gain valuable growth
opportunities. I think the key is how to explore these benefits and better our
sport but not to select from these two sports types.
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