雅思小作文流程图题型实例讲解 并不简单也不难！

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很多同学都特别怕雅思小作文的流程图题型，每次考试的时候遇到流程图心里就会“咯噔”一下，看到流程图的第一反应就是不知道从哪下笔，平铺直叙怕写成流水账，总结概括又怕漏掉重要信息。

【流程图写作特点及写作要点】

1. 找到流程图的过程，起点，终点。

2. 找到图上标出的已知动作，如果出现生词，尽量猜测。无词，用自己的语言。

3. 按照步骤，分段描述，千万不能省略任何一步。

4. 切记!加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。

5. 句型以主动为主，搭配被动，以及主语从句(例如：It can be seen from the graph that…)。

6. 时态要使用一般现在时。

例文分析：

【高分范文及深度点评】

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making

chocolate.(所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process整个过程;stage阶段;step步骤)

Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South

America, Africa and Indonesia.(开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao

tree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突)

【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】

【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】

【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa

beans.

【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans

are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden

boxes.(三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。)

During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】

Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in

large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken

to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of

between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed.

This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the

bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.

【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】

【满分范文】

The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be

outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was

just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a

digger.

Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the

big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid

onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water

are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or

cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.

Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a

maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The

dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high

temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300

℃. This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72

hours in a cooling chamber.

Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and

delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.

(215 words)

【考官评语】

Band 9

This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features

of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An

excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully

incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a

brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with

seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and

referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and

sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full

flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ‘slips’ can be found and these do not

detract from the high rating.

由此可见，在雅思小作文流程图中，需要特别注意的地方是很多的，但同时这也意味着当烤鸭们把这些特别注意的地方搞定就会是一篇高分的经典文章。