2016年11月5日雅思考试大作文范文一枚

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Task：Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming

more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming

more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own

opinion.

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Sample answer：

When it comes to the issue about how independent people are in the

contemporary society, some people may argue that people begin to live on their

own instead of relying on others, but others believe that individuals are still

related to each other tightly.

On one hand, individuals are encouraged to express their ideas and feelings

currently, which contributes to their independence to some degree. It is

acknowledged that creativity is focused on in modern society and it actually

means that one needs to challenge the authority with new ideas. Through such a

process, people actually could establish confidence gradually, and critical

thinking has become a necessity for the public, allowing the public to be more

independent.

On the other hand, division of labor strengthens the relationship among

people. It is common that, in current enterprises, employees do have their

specific tasks and they need to cooperate with each other. Also, on the global

scale, countries are related to each other due to globalization. The direct

consequence is that employees cannot accomplish a task independently without

peers’ assistance; similarly, a country may not develop its economy if it is

isolated from other countries.

From my own perspective, these two phenomena do not necessarily contradict

each other, and they could be observed simultaneously. Taking living

individually as an example, people could live a comfortable life even if they

are separate from society. For instance, one could order food, domestic service

and other service through the Internet, and then they do not need to rely on

their relatives any more. However, living alone does not mean that one is

totally detached from society. It may not challenging for some introverted

people, like Otaku in Japanese, to stay at home for even a month without going

out, but it may be difficult for them to have no access to social websites for a

single day. The popularity of social platforms, such as Facebook and Twitter,

actually enables users to communicate with each other online, which actually

reflects that people may live an independent life on the surface, but their

social ties are maintained and even stronger.

(353 words)

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