2017年5月20日雅思写作考试真题范文:控制犯罪[小雅版]

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雅思A类大作文The government should control the amount of violence in films and on

television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what

extent do you agree or disagree?影视中的暴力情节需要管控，以减少社会里的暴力犯罪。

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Violent crime is a social ill that has no easy cure, whereas some suggest the

government can reduce it by simply restricting violent contents on screens. I

disagree with this view and instead I will argue that violence on screens

does not necessarily contribute to violence in real life.

some people voice alarm seeing more and more violent scenes displayed in

films or TV programmes in fear that they can lead copy crimes. One of their

arguments may be that the bombardments of romantised violence may send a wrong

message to the mass that violence is warranted or even aesthetically appealing.

Another possible argument is that some wannabe offenders may use well-crafted

violent details as some kind of textbooks, guidelines and source of inspirations

to commit actual crimes. A typical case goes as follows: a gang copied the cruel

but cunning trick to make money out of innocent lives from a public released

film in China about two professional killers murdering fellow miners, disguising

it as a mine accident and swindling a fortune from mine owners.

But as we approach this issue more closely, in fact, films and TV are great

medium to inform and educate as well as entertain, even though it is about

violence. No better way than a vivid screen depiction of violence can teach us

the barbarity and senselessness of itself, and the tragic outcome it may bring.

It is also an effective deterrence to crime since more often than not, violence

on screens ends up as the violators being punished accordingly. Another notable

point is life on screens can offer a valuable vicarious experience and thus make

up for the sorriness felt on something we should not or cannot do in the real

world. By viewing the imagined violence audience do find an opening to vent

their negative feelings and that catharsis effect is real good.

The role the government should play here, I believe, is the introduction and

enforcement of a content rating system. Some countries have already established

proper ones and I suggest the others follow suit. Freedom of artistic creating

and a worthy concern for violence contents on susceptible audience like young

children can inclusively coexist.

In conclusion, violence on screens is not blame for violent crimes in our

society and what the government really should do is formulating an effective

rating system and revising it continually to the best possible version.