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Task：Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in

their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to

national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give

your opinion.

Sample answer：

Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living,

it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the

poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds

of help should be encouraged and respected.

Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems

reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot

of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and

extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our

fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see

the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to

track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in

some cases.

Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that

the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared

with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large

amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas.

Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also

purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money

raised worldwide and save millions children’s life.

In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should

be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it

desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help.

At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for

donors.

(275 words)

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