雅思写作范文分析—假日旅游类

2024-04-26

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雅思写作范文分析—假日旅游类

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这道题目要求烤鸭就“从事不同职业的人是否应该在不同的时间休假”发表自己的看法,是典型的观点类雅思作文题目。范文的写作与最传统的观点类议论文写作方法有细微的不同。该范文氛围四段:第一段开门见山地给出作者观点,即应该是灵活安排假期;第二,三段列举不同方面的论据,有力地支持了作者的观点;末尾段再重申作者的观点的同时,还给出了自己的建议。

雅思写作范文分析—假日旅游类

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题目从事不同职业的人是否应该在不同的时间休假?请给出你的看法。

Should people doing different jobs have holidays at different time of the

year? What is your opinion?

More and more people choose to avoid the holiday seasons to go traveling

because tourist sites are invariably(不变地,adv) overcrowded(过渡拥挤, vt) during

public holidays. To enjoy yourselves you need to take a vacation when most people

are working. Apart from public holidays, employees should be allowed an annual

holiday at the time they choose.

雅思写作范文分析—假日旅游类

The idea of people in different professions having holidays at different time

is often out of necessity. Places such as hospitals, fire departments and even

restaurants should be in operation all year long. Thus, their employees must

partake in some kind of rotating vacation system, whereby each of them takes

some days off by turn and on an irregular basis. Besides, some jobs are only

seasonal. Teachers, for example, enjoy summer and winter holidays. In many lines

of business, there is a peak seasonand a trough season. It is only reasonable to

allow workers to take some days off when the business is slack.(冷清的,adj)

In addition, this kind of liberal(不拘泥的,adj) attitude toward holidays can

reduce the strains(紧张, n) on public facilities during the holiday season. As

things stand now, it is a nightmare to travel during public holidays, for there

will be throngs of people everywhere. It is hard to get tickets, book rooms or

even to find decent eateries. The infrastructure is not adequate enough to cope

with the influx(流入,n) of tourists swarming(涌往, v)to certain numbers of scenic

spots. With separate holidays becoming the norm, people can better enjoy their

vacations.

The ideal way would be for the employees todecide the time and duration of

the holidays, provided that it doesn’tinterfere(干涉,vi) with the running of the

business. People themselves know when they would most enjoy a vacation. It is

ultimately a personal matter and should be left to our own discretion(判断力, n) if

possible.

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