3月4日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 我们只保护对人类有用的濒危动物，就行了吗?

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2021年3月4日雅思大作文题目

Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect

animals that are useful to human. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文及解析

01、Troubled by the rising number of endangered animals, many people propose

that animal conservation should only be centered on the benefits for humans. I

do not think such a viewpoint is acceptable.

解析

Ø 根据题目背景，确定写作范围是围绕濒危动物而展开，因此所保护的并非是所有动物

02、Admittedly, these people have the validity to hold this opinion, which

is because the existence and extinction of species are originally a

demonstration of a natural law: survival for the fittest. As the highest

creature in nature, humans should consider the benefits brought by these

endangered animals to our survival and development, and then selectively protect

them. For example, in order to protect ourselves from the cold, people can

choose to use the fur from the wild mink to make clothes for people to keep

warm, and through the protection of these wild animals, the relevant mink-made

products are available to people for a long time. However, this is a dangerous

choice, violating the laws and regulations as those animals are hunted almost to

extinction. What people see as "useful" is actually profitable, and "profit" is

mostly driven by greed.

解析

Ø 这一段让步从“利”的角度出发，阐述人们能从保护对人有益的濒危动物中获取到的好处，并以野生貂为例;

Ø validity：符合逻辑的

Ø mink：貂

Ø profitable：有利可图的

Ø greed：贪婪

03、In modern days, the reason why numerous animals become endangered is

largely due to the random killing by humans. In order to improve the so-called

"quality of life", humans will hunt and kill many animals to make the

corresponding goods, such as elephant for ivory,rhinoceros for horns and Tibetan

antelope for skin. With these animals dying out, the ecological balance will be

disrupted, followed by some potential irreversible effects. A potentillustration

of this is the proliferation of a certain species caused by the disappearance of

itsnatural enemies, which in turn incurs the damage to people's lives. While if

endangered animals are protected as a whole, the public can be educated to

re-examine the role they play in the biosphere, thus changing consumption

choices and creating a healthy balance between economy and ecology. Hence, we

should protect all endangered animals in order to help maintain the stability of

the ecosphere.

解析

Ø 反驳段开门见山指出当下动物濒危的原因几乎都和人类有关，因此应该对这些动物都进行保护，否则生态平衡会进一步受到影响;

Ø ivory：象牙

Ø rhinoceros horns：犀牛角

Ø Tibetan antelope: 藏羚羊

Ø disrupt：使混乱

Ø potent：强有力的

Ø proliferation：激增

Ø natural enemies：天敌

Ø biosphere/ ecosphere：生物圈

04、In short, people cannot protect endangered animals selectively. The

protection of these animals is closely related to the future development of

human beings.

解析

Ø 总结人们不应选择性保护，因为保护这些动物和人类的未来息息相关。