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Task：It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of

unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or

drawbacks to the community and the young people?

Sample answer：

In recent years, it has become more and more common for societies to

encourage young people to do unpaid work in the local community. In my view, the

voluntary participation of youth brings more benefits to young people and

community.

By doing unpaid work, young people can gain experience and exercise skills,

which are helpful for their performance in the future career life. For instance,

when they work with others and interact with people, they can enhance their

abilities of problem solving, communication and teamwork. Also, young people

will feel a sense of belonging to the local community through voluntary work,

building unity and reducing distrust among members of community. To communities,

with the help of young people, they can reduce the financial burden of the

community. If communities employ professional workers to do the same work, a

high cost certainly occurs. But now, local councils can do more in other aspects

like updating sport facilities or supporting disabled people, with the saving

money.

Despite those merits of voluntary work, there are some potential drawbacks.

Unpaid work might occupy a lot of time, which will lead to an obvious decrease

in their learning efficiency in school or workplace. Besides, how to organize

young people to work systematically is still a problem to local communities.

Communities should avoid potential conflicts since these young people come from

different social backgrounds.

From the above discussion, young people should be encouraged to do unpaid

work since community service is good for youngsters’ future career life.

Meanwhile, communities can save money to do something more beneficial to local

community construction. However, there are still some negative points such as

wasting time for young people and hard organization for community.

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