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2018年7月28号雅思写作真题话题：Some people who have been in prison become citizens later.

Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about

the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?已经成为良好市民的ex-prisioner，是最合适的人选，来教育学生关于犯罪的危害么？

雅思写作话题分析：

看到题目中说the best，作为一个极限词，当然会本能的反对。这个词也算是该话题的题眼。

承认former prisoner的优势：

自己经历有说服力

不觉得former prisoner好：

家长也可以教育孩子啊，孩子不会觉得害怕

警察也可以，了解法律的细节更多

所以，立场也就有了，肯定它的一部分作用，但认为还有其他不错的方式来教育孩子。

参考雅思范文：

Some people believe that people who used to be prisoners are the best people

who can persuade students to comply with laws. However, I cannot agree with this

opinion.

Admittedly, rehabilitated offenders can share their experience in prison with

students. For people who committed crimes impulsively, most of them feel

regretful for their behavior, and from their stories, students can learn the

consequences of committing crimes. For example, criminal records will make it

difficult for people to reintegrate into the society. Nevertheless, there are

better roles who can educate students on the topic of crime more

effectively.

To begin with, parents may have a deeper impact on students. After all, not

all people have a positive image of ex-prisoners, and some students are even

afraid of them. However, parents have a more intimate relationship with their

children, and most children will listen to what their parents say. Therefore,

letting rehabilitated prisoners give speeches may make students frightened,

while parents can educate their children in a more acceptable way.

In addition, inviting policemen is also an optimal choice. Compared to former

prisoners, policemen are more familiar with laws, and they can tell students

some details about laws. For example, students can realize that friendship is no

more important than laws, and helping friends sell drugs also violates the law.

Then, students can have a better understanding for obeying laws, including what

they can do and what they should not do.

To sum up, parents and the police are better choices for educating students

about the consequences of committing crimes, considering that parents are close

to their children, and the police know details of laws.

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