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Task：School leavers go travelling or work before they go directly to

university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study?

Sample answer：

Before the beginning of university, students who wish to continue with their

education face two probable choice--either suspend their study for a year to

obtain work and travel experience, or go directly into university. I will

analyze the pros and cons of these two choices below.

A year’s time to work or travel before university has been popular among

young people in recent years. In fact, students can obtain several good points

by doing this. To begin with, students can enhance their life skills and

maintain a balance between their studies and work from the one yeat experience.

They will become more independent during this meaningful process. Also, they can

identify career preference and areas of interests during travelling, which will

help them to decide their major in university.

However, one year’s work or travel also has its obvious disadvantages. Coming

fresh out og high school, students do not have a clear understanding of the

harsh realities of the world. They are not in a strong position to undertake

early employment. Besides, young people are not able to make a correct career

decision. Choosing a career requires sufficient knowledge of one’s own

strengths, aptitudes and the trends in job market. Most young adults lack such

knowledge. Moreover, travelling and working will divert young people’s attention

from their previous objectives. If students give up the opportunity of being

educated and pursue other ventures, they will lose their willpower to learn

something carefully and patiently. The side effect of disengagement from

schooling might not be significant in the first several years, but it will surly

disadvantages them a lot in a long run.

To conclude, work or travel before university has its advantages and

disadvantages. In fact, the disadvantages outweigh advantages.

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