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Task:City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of
community has been lost. Why has this happened and how to solve this
problem?越来越多的人们选择买属于自己的汽车。你认为这样的趋势给环境带来的好处大于坏处吗?
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Sample answer:
In the current era, there is a phenomenon that urban residents are not eager
to communicate with their neighbors and they do not have a sense of community.
This essay may examine the possible reasons and potential solutions to reversing
this tendency.
To begin with, modern technologies may attract individuals’ attention than
face-to-face communication does. It is acknowledged that online communities have
developed and become a fad among the public. For many citizens, they can bear
staying at home for several days without meeting others, but they may suffer
from no access to the Internet since they need to communicate with other online
friends. Then, residents actually have a sense of community, but what they care
about is virtual communities, not traditional communities any more.
In addition, urban inhabitants may have insufficient time and vigor to
interact with people nearby. Compared to workers in rural areas, employees in
downtown may be more occupied their work and working overtime may not be a rare
case. When these exhausted employees arrive at their own home, what they want is
to take a shower and sleep immediately. Thus, too much working burden actually
hinders people from communicating with others, which leads to that they do not
take their communities seriously.

As for addiction to the Internet, governments could encourage communities to
hold more face-to-face activities. For example, some sport games, such as
playing badminton in communities, could be supported and promoted by governments
and governments could emphasize on that lacking exercise may lead to a series of
diseases, such as obesity. Then, more citizens may be willing to go out and take
part in more community activities. In terms of tired workers, guaranteeing
holidays and other necessary rights of employees should be one of the top
priorities for the authorities. Subsequently, workers may have their private
lives since they do not spend all their time on working anymore, which allows
them to join in community activities as well.
In sum, the popularity of online communities and tiredness due to working

excessively may account for why individuals in cities may not care about their
communities. In order to tackle this issue, encouraging engagement on offline
events and guaranteeing employees’ leisure time should be considered by
governments.
(372 words)
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