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雅思写作A类大作文

类型

政府类

题目

Some

people think governments should spend money on saving languages with fewer

speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial

resources.

Discuss

both these views and give your own opinions.

范文解析

这是一道2011年的旧题，

文章结构

P1：引入话题+表明作者观点，保护濒危语言不是资源浪费

P2：对立观点语言的消逝是一种自然的进程，将资金用在其他地方会更有实际意义

P3：语言不仅是为了交流，更承载了文化、知识和记忆，保护语言是保护文化多样性

P4：语言更深层次的智慧

P5：总结重申作者观点

高分话题表达（范文中已用红色标注）

teeter

on the brink of extinction

摇摆在灭绝的边缘

dying

tongues

灭绝的语言

subsidize

资助

a

money waster

一个浪费钱的行为

be

unstoppable artificially

不能被人为地阻止

money-consuming

消耗钱的

labor

intensive

劳动密集的

ineffective

and intangible

无效的和无形的

poverty

alleviation

扶贫

language

revitalization

语言复兴

intertwined

错综复杂的

simply

put

简言之

revive

a language

复兴语言

culture

diversity

文化多样性

a

wealth of wisdom

很多的智慧

capitalize

on

利用

be

committed to

致力于

雅思写作原创范文

The

more successful a country was economically, the more rapidly its languages

were being losing and for these reasons and others, hundreds of languages are teetering on the brink of extinction and even

become unfortunately extinct ones. However, the investment in protecting and

preserving those dying tongues is to some

extent not wasteful but necessarily worthwhile for government.

Compared

with subsidizing the improvement of economy

and education, funding the conservation of minority language appears to be a money waster. This is mainly because language

death might be a natural part of the process of human cultural development

and might be unstoppable artificially and

because preventing it is not just money-consuming but labor intensive, an ineffective and intangible effort that may turn out

to be meaningless. The money spent on unrewarding these activities, if invested

in more significant undertakings such as poverty

alleviation, AIDS combating, scientific research, etc., will be

obviously beneficial to the general public and the whole society.

But

this is not that simple. Financing language

revitalization, on the other hand, is of cultural significance indeed

and thus does worth the governments’ while. It is widely

acknowledged that culture and language are undeniably intertwined and each language, more than just a means of

communication, fully carries a unique culture and is the home of a nation’s mind, conveying the knowledge, thought and faith of its

speakers. Simply put, when preserving and reviving a language even fewer people use, people

protect the culture diversity and when losing

a language, we lose a culture heritage.

Not

only does reviving endangered languages financially preserve cultural

diversity but it empowers humans to promote and progress in all fields. Containing

an accumulated body of scientific knowledge, including about geography,

mathematics, navigation, astronomy, and many more, every language is a wealth of wisdom from which future generations can

fully capitalize on to spark thoughts, to

solve different puzzles and problems and more importantly to develop further.

In other words, without languages, there will be no knowledge on which a

society relies to prosper. Therefore，being

committed to preserving their dying tongues by

different resources not just by money is what each governments and

individuals should do.

To

conclude, useless as it may seem, investing in minority language is

beneficial to both culture and social cohesion rather than wasting money.

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