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Some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different

cultures or ages together.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

教师示范

Introduction

“笼统”是关键。

People of different cultures or of different ages may sit in the same

musical hall or listen to the same song. This is a good indication of that music

brings cultures and age groups together.

Body

应题的关键(可能)在于“解剖”music，然后从music的多个parts讨论。

理由一：

中心句(笼统说明段落大意)： Some music has the lyrics that can touch both a 20-year-old

and a senior. 根据中心句展开(说明白具体情况)：Those lyrics may depict the youth that the older

used to have and the younger is currently enjoying. Since both of the listeners

can relate to the words, they are connected. The lyrics may also describe

feelings that people of any age can have, such as the sorrow at the sight of a

loss of life or the defeat when a major failure happens. A listener may

therefore empathize with another because of the shared feeling provoked by the

lyrics despite the age difference.

理由二：

中心句(笼统说明段落大意)： The beats and melodies of good music usually followuniversal

aesthetics cross cultures. 根据中心句展开(说明白具体情况)： The strong beats of African music

may arouse the excitement of both a westerner and a Chinese listener, and the

two listeners, albeit from different cultures, become friends for the same

taste. The symphony, having its origin in Europe, is quite popular in some

oriental countries and connects people from the ends of the world. Recent years

have also witnessed the growing popularity of Chinese folk music in Europe and

North America, and this indicates that music is cross-cultural.

理由三：

In addition, a piece of music that involves a musician can bring together

people of different cultures and ages because of the common adoration or

admiration for the singer or player. The cultural difference or age gap does not

affect the listeners’ shared love for the musician and the music.

Conlusion：

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