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2019年4月6日小作文题目

国内(A类)：柱图

The chart below shows the sales of four kinds of games around the world in

2000 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

数据之间的比较关系

范文及解析

柱形图的考核点：数据之间的比较关系：

1. 同时不同项：在2000年的时候两种游戏之间的比较，同在2006年的时候四种游戏之间的比较。

2. 同项不同时：比如console games在2000年和在2006年之间的比较。

教师示范写作一

Introduction

The bars are the illustrations of the sales of four types of games were

sold worldwide in 2000 and 2006.

body

Except console games, whose sales in 2006 had a slight decrease compared

with the 2000’s level, all types of games were sold more in 2006 than in

2000.←紧凑写法，展开写法→ The sales of console games in 2006 had a slight decrease

compared with the 2000’s level. The opposite is the case in the other types of

games. More copies of each type were sold in 2006 than in 2000.

[这两种写法的区别在于：1、句型的复杂程度，紧凑复杂，展开简单。2、展开写法里用了一个完整的句子去描述信息之间的逻辑关系，在紧凑写法里是用一个词来描述逻辑关系。]

在描述完宏观之后，描述微观，于是全文的行文逻辑是：由总「general」到分「specifics」

As a matter of fact, the popularity of console games was already at a low

level in the year of 2000, as only 50 million copies were sold worldwide that

year. The contrast was obvious as console games were compared with handheld

games. The sales of handheld games were 75 million copies in 2000, and they were

almost 4 times higher in 2006. In terms of mobile phone games and online games,

the sales of neither were available in 2000, and it is notable that the sales of

both were considerable in 2006. The respective sales were 150 million and 180

million copies. At this point, it is clear that handheld games were most

prevalent in the year of 2006.

Conclusion

Overall, the year of 2006 witnessed a remarkable increase in the popularity

of those games compared with 2000.

教师示范写作二

The bars are illustrations of the sales of four kinds of games worldwide,

and a comparison is made between two years, 2000 and 2006.

写作思路：

1. 图中仅有6个数字，数据的取舍就很容易了(几乎没有舍)。

2.数据之间的比较(年份之间、游戏之间)关系是写作内容的关键。

In 2000, only two games were available, and their respective sales were 50

million (console games) and 75 million (handheld games). 6 years later, there

was an expanded market of games, with sales of mobile phone games and online

games springing up to 150 million and 180 million copies respectively. In the

same year, the growth in handheld games first was also aggressive. With the 270

million copies sold, this type of games ranked first in the market. Moreover,

although the 10-million shrinkage of the sales of console games was moderate in

proportion to its sales in 2000, it is notable, since it contrasted sharply with

the sales increases in other types of games.

Overall, despite the decreased popularity of console games, the year of

2006 witnessed enormous development of the game industry, compared with the year

of 2000.

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