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Task：Many people spend long periods of time working and living away from home.

Does this have more advantages than disadvantages for the people involved?

很多人花长期远离家外出工作和生活，这对他们来说是优点多还是缺点多呢?

参考范文：

It is a common phenomenon that people, especially many of the city

white-collar class, left their home to work and live in civic center or

metropolis. Advocator hold the view that it is beneficial for people’s personal

development, whereas objectors believe it results to lack of time sharing with

their family members.

One of the main reasons why so many young adults decide to work and live away

from home is that they believe central business districts and big cities can

provide them with more employment options and career opportunities than the

places they lived before. And some consider that the fierce business competition

in downtown area can encourage workers to fully apply themselves to personal

career development and to be more enterprising and ambitious. Besides of work

demands, downtown can also provide people with a variety of recreation and

networking activities as there are plenty of facilities such as restaurants and

bars in the civic center, where people can enjoy a colorful life with their

friends and colleagues after work.

Others believe that no matter how occupied one might be, one should always

bear in mind that family goes first and he or she should never neglect family

because of work. One’s sense of fulfillment and achievement from work can never

be a substitution for the pleasure and joy by family activities. And there is no

way communications and feeling exchanges among family members can be replaced by

social activities.

Even though that working and living away from home may lead to less time

spending with one’s family, it does not necessarily mean that one should give up

the opportunity to work in a big city or central area. And people can still keep

in touch with their parents or children by making phone calls and having video

chats regularly and they can also spend time with their family during

holidays.

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