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　 题目给出一个时间点：

2014年写作者应确定两点：1.时态;2.“同时不同项(十个)”。

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可以从结构的角度方面没有conclusion，但是从内容的角度方面不可以没有overview。如果overview在introduction处出现，那么可以从结构的角度而言没有conclusion。

范文及解析

The bars illustrate ten countries’ production and consumption of

electricity in the year of 2014, and the ten countries produced and consumed

more electrical power than did the world’s other countries. Overall, of the ten

countries, the two leading ones left the others far behind, and in nine of the

ten countries, the production could meet the need ←注意：没有机械的说成“was greater than

the consumption”.

注意：Body和Introduction的信息联系(方框里的话)。

China and the US were the two leading countries. ←总(笼统，免数据)-分(要有具体的数据信息)→

In China, the output and usage were both over 5,300 billion kWh, and in the US,

the figures were roughly 4,000 billion, and the massiveamounts made the two

countries ahead of the other countries by enormous margins.

注意：被作者选出的main features是哪些。

Among the other eight countries, Russia is noteworthy,

←总(笼统，免数据)-分(要有具体的数据信息)结构在一个句子中体现：主句描述“总”，状语从句描述“分”。→ since it was the only

country where more than 1,000 billion kWh of electricity was produced and

meanwhile consumed. By marked contrast, South Korea is noticeable for its lowest

position. Germany and India are also notable. ←总(笼统，免数据)-分(要有具体的数据信息)→ There was

inadequacy of electricity in German, since the country produced 526 billion kWh

whereas consumed 582 billion kWh, and, in India, the roughly 172 billion kWh

surplus was the largest among the nine countries whose production was greater

than the consumption. Meanwhile, Japan, Canada, France, and Brazil were on the

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