雅思口语话题part2参考范文之：被污染的地方

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2018年5-8月雅思口语part2新题预测之：被污染的地方(a place you visited has been affected by pollution)，范文为高分考生原创，内容有关：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访(……在你的城市/国家……的地区名称)，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。。口语水平的提高需要一段很长时间积累的过程，所以找对口语范文很关键。学习模仿雅思口语范文要点有3：1.native speaker的地道用词，2.丰富灵活的动词，3.高分句型并熟练背诵之。话不多说，口语范文自取：

Describe a place you visited has been affected by pollution

:

• What the place is

• What type of pollution it is/ are

• Cause and effect of pollution

and explain how can this pollution be controlled.

1.适用考生：全适用

2.主题：旅行地污染

3.故事线：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访(……在你的城市/国家……的地区名称)，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。

雅思口语高分范文示例：

Last year I went to visit (...say an area name in your city/country...)with

two of my friends and thought we would enjoy our trip. We heard from a teacher

that this was a beautiful place to visit and after that, we planned to go there.

To our surprise, this place was severely affected by the pollution and instead

of enjoying our trip, we cut it short and returned home immediately.

It was early summer last year and visiting a place near a river which is

surrounded by natural beauty and recommended by one of our favourite teachers

was an excellent idea, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who

suggested this place had no idea about the severity of the pollution there and

how things have become worse.

The water pollution was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements

that were floating on the water created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled waste

management, toxic elements from factories and industries, motorised vehicles

running on the water and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the

main reasons the water has got polluted. More shockingly, the air pollution was

also noticeable. I saw many industries and factories that were exhausting black

fumes and that has made the air polluted more than any other part I know

about.

Uncontrolled urbanisation, the establishment of new factories ;

industries without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in

government offices are so far the main reasons for increasing pollution in our

country. I wish this will stop and we will be conscious enough not to destroy

our own inhabitants.

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