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　 　2023.12.7 独立写作题目

“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Movies and television programs should present stories that good people

should be rewarded and bad people should be punished.”

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论证思路：

* Right moral values are important for teenage viewers, who are in the

formative years, they are also important for adults, many of whom have lost

their confidence in the system.

* Movies and television programs serve to promote the right values and

strengthen people’s faith in the society.

* TV producers and film makers may be under that pressure that the viewers

want to see the moral edification.

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Introduction

少废话：

Viewers can be swayed by what they see in movies and TV programs. It is

therefore important that those productions promote what is right; otherwise,

people may generate feelings like anxiety and confusion.

Body

First, right moral values are important for teenage viewers, who are in

theformative years. 典型的展开结构，中心句后简单解释： Since their worldview is still developing

and forming, adolescent viewers need the absoluterighteousness, which may be an

idealistic idea yet the core of good values.论证技巧：正说后反说： They would otherwise be

confused or even go astray. 典型的展开结构，讲完道理举例子： For example, a few years ago, when

I saw, in the movie, that Spiderman was unwelcome by the citizens of New York

City, I was baffled as to why such a good person who should have deserved

tremendous applause would be abandoned. It was not until the end of the story

when people finally appreciated his good intents and deeds that I stopped being

perplexed by the story. The happy ending was critical to the formation of my

worldview as a young man, as my confusion was dispelled. The story eventually

confirmed the values I had been instilled from my family and education.

← 段落也要有篇幅区分 →

Meanwhile, the right values are important for adults, many of whom have

lost their confidence in the system. Such movies and TV are therescue those

adults need. ← 中心句可以被拆成两句来说。论证技巧：跳过解释，直接举例子，以例子来诠释道理： This actually happens

often. ← 引出例子的(套话性质的)小短句。 There are realities where good people are not fairly

treated, and some adult people may feel disappointed and doubtful about the

system. Fortunately, when they watch such movies and TV, they can retrieve their

faith in society.

In addition, not only viewers but also TV producers and film makers need

such movies and TV programs. For those producers, as they may be aware of

viewers’ need for the moral edification, they should feel urged to make such

films and TV. Some producers, probably in pursuit of unconventional artistic

value, have used plots that are contrary to the general principle and values

that good people are rewarded and the bad punished, and ended up with receiving

intense rejection. This the opposite case is the lesson. In fact, in China and

the US, few← 措辞技巧：不在动词处否定，而在名词处否定。successful productions, whose number is

colossal, and their producersdisobey or deviate from the mainstream values. ←

看出来最后一句其实是例子吧。

Conclusion

同样少废话：

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