雅思写作Task1小作文柱状图范文--男女在不同部门就业的数目

北京雅思培训,雅思备考资料,雅思网课,雅思培训机构,雅思保分班,雅思真题,雅思课程

Task：The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995

in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.

Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

雅思小作文柱状图范文汇总，点击进入

参考范文：

The two decades between 1975 and 1995 brought significant changes in the

representation of women in Freedonia's work force, according to the graphs.

In 1975, for example, some 300 000 men and 250 000 women worked in the

communications sector. Twenty years later, though the number of men remained

unchanged, the number of women rose to 550 000.

A similar situation was seen in the wholesale and retail trade sector, where

the number of women rose from about 550 000 in 1975 to almost 800 000 two

decades later. The number of men in this sector remained stable over the period,

at around 700 000.

Women also made gains in both the finance/banking industries and in the

defence-related public sector. Whereas some 125 000 women worked in finance and

banking institutions in 1975, the number increased to 450 000 by 1995. The

number of men grew only marginally from 425 000 to 480 000 over the same period.

In defence, the number of men declined from 225 000 to 200 000, while the number

of women rose from 25 000 to over 100 000.

Two sectors that retained stable employment numbers for both men and women

were manufacturing, which had about 300 000 women and 650 000 men in both

surveyed years, and the public sector (non-defence), which employed 650 000

women and 850 000 men.

Thus, women appear to have made gains in the Freedonian work force but not at

the expense of men.

(245 words)