【易伯华出品】2017年3月4日雅思G类大作文范文

2024-04-25

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【易伯华出品】2017年3月4日雅思G类大作文范文

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Task:Some people think all children should learn to paint and draw at school, but

others think it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your own

opinion.

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People hold divergent opinions about whether students should attend painting

and drawing class at school. Some people believe it is beneficial for their

development while others argue that it costs too much time.

Some people may hold the viewpoint that students are already under enough

pressure with their academic study, which has a direct relation with their

【易伯华出品】2017年3月4日雅思G类大作文范文

future development. Subjects like math and science require amounts of time and

numerous efforts. And on top of attending these classes every weekday, they have

to do homework, preparing for the exams. Only when students have excellent

school performance, can they enter top universities, which is not only the goal

of the students, but also the expectation of most parents.

However, just acquiring academic knowledge is not enough for students to cope

with the challenges in the future and sometimes some other skills are also

required in the real-world tasks. Painting and drawing is a perfect way to

encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration. If students are

equipped with these skills through painting and drawing class, they will have an

advantage over others who do not attend this kind of class in many tasks, such

as writing a short story.

In conclusion, from my point of view, although it may take some time for

students to learn painting and drawing, it will contribute to their future

development in the long term. And in this sense, this practice is worth

encouraging.

(239 words)原创范文来自易伯华教研范砚秋老师

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