【易伯华教育】2015年1月—8月雅思大作文范文精讲

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2015年1月10日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some

people say that young people can also be a leader what extent do you think?

分 析 ：

2015首场大作文题目略抽象，难在拓展 。

范文是双边论证，方法用的是具体化，参考范文

It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are

elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also

eligible to take important positions in today's world.

On the one hand, compared to the young generation, elderly people possess

more edges. First and foremost, they have better cognitive skills, such as

big-picture thinking and long-term vision. This is because years of work

experience and failures teach them to take every aspect into consideration

before making important decisions.

By contrast, due to a lack of social experience, young leaders seem to make

shortsighted decisions sometimes. Moreover, since the old have already overcome

countless difficulties and challenges prior, they can quickly adjust their mood

in turmoil and lift the morale of the whole organization.

On the other hand, there are two reasons why younger directors are also

competent to be leaders in important positions. In the first place, with

well-educated backgrounds, young leaders are more likely to have a deep

understanding of cultural difference, and they can empathize with other

employees and clients much better. Today, empathy plays a key role in retention

of talents. For example, it is easy to misunderstand others in a cross-cultural

dialogue. When good employees resign, they -might take the company's knowledge

with them, which is a brain drain for the company. Secondly, compared with the

senior leaders, young directors can apply the latest technology and theory into

practice, and this can counteract negative stereotype of management and greatly

improve the productivity.

In conclusion, in my opinion, age should not be the criterion when selecting

the leader of leadership can play his or her role in the organization.

2015年1月17日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled

strictly, others say that people are free to make as much as they wish. Discuss

both sides and give your opinion

分析：

本题是社会方式中的一种题型，属于新题型，对于学生考试一族来说，较有难度。

范文将正文段分为两部分，分别就两个论点给出作者自己的观点。对于第一个论点，对于第一个论点，作者持肯定态度，而第二个论点，则持否定态度。

主体段的观点大意及支持句：

第一个观点：

生活中的很多噪音是不可避免的

第二个观点：

生活中不必要的噪音是应该被控制的，因为这些噪音对个人而言，会影响他人的健康和工作效率。而且控制噪音体现了社会成员之间的互相关心，可以使社会更和谐。

参考范文

Recently, a growing number of people make noise in public or at their homes

regardless of others' feeling. Regarding the problem of whether citizens should

exercise strict control over the amount and volume of noise or not, people hold

different views.

It is obviously reasonable for those to argue that tight noise control should

be implemented. Initially, noise could exert detrimental effects on individuals'

physical and mental health. Living in communities, citizens will inevitably be

affected by their neighborhoods or coworkers. When the noise produced goes

beyond a certain degree, it will influence the victim's the physical health.

Related research shows that long term exposure in a high-pitched environment

could result in diseases like high blood pressure or heart disease. Meanwhile,

the mental health of the victim would also suffer as he or she is mentally

traumatized by the noise, hence residents should strictly control their noise to

protect the physical and mental wellbeing of their neighbors.

Also, it is generally believed that a person who exerts tight control over

his or her noise is a well-educated citizen with good manner. When a social

member is conscious of others' wellbeing and is willing to make a sacrifice for

the harmony of the neighborhood, he is a responsible and well-qualified

citizen.

By contrast, there are those who contend that it is personal choice to decide

how much noise they could make. Obviously, those people believe noise making is

an individual rather than community act and what they do should not be

influenced by others: However, they have overlooked a fact that people live in a

connected world and inevitably what one did could have an influence on

others.

In my view, well-educated citizens should exert tight control over the volume

and amount of their noise. For those opponents, they could do whatever they like

only if they could make sure the noise they make is within a certain limit and

will not disturb others. If they could not meet this premise, they could by no

means enjoy their so called freedom.

2015年1月29日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments

such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh

the disadvantages?

分析： 本文支持缺点大于优点这一观点。

缺点：

1.去这些地方旅游会对原始环境造成破坏;

2.一些国家可能会为了抢夺稀缺的资源，而发生冲突。

参考范文

Unknown natural is always brimming with seductive scenery. Plenty of

researchers and travelers make trips to distant natural places, such as the

Mount Qomolangma, Antarctica and the North Pole. I am of the opinion that this

has more disadvantages than advantages.

Discover of new areas always bring some irreparable destruction. Before the

South Pole is in the sight of public, it was once an uncharted territory. Since

its discovery, hundreds of explorers and scientists had taken adventures to this

wilderness. At the same time, their scientific expedition may leave some

geographical environment destruction there. And it is quite troublesome to make

up such destruction.

Although travelers extremely enjoy the breathtaking natural landscape, they

bring along tremendous risks. One of the most common phenomenon of travelers is

producing pollution to local areas. As reported in many cases, holidaymakers

have left behind tons of waste in the Antarctica over the last century. This

will not only threaten the survival of many creatures, including endangered

species such as penguins and seals, but also cause irreversible damage to the

ecosystem.

In addition, we cannot avoid the fact that untouched environment are

scientifically proved to have considerable oil and gas reserves. Currently, the

world fuel supply is running out in the next fifty years, and no countries will

help themselves from the temptation of these fuel sources. 'The greed of people

will drive them to drain out the resource in these regions, and by then places

like the South Pole will be truly deserted.

In conclusion, I confirm that travelling to virgin land will bring far more

losses than gains.

2015年1月31日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to

the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?

分析

这次的题目是少见的动物类，但是同学们要将题目着眼于是否保护动物，而不要太纠结于too much, 否则可能会很难下笔或者缺乏思路。

参考范文

In recent years, animal protection has become an issue of concern. People

take different attitudes toward the increasing attention and expenditure on

wildlife conservations. Some people suggest that the spending should be

redirected to helping other fields in our society. I agree with the view that

the investment in wildlife protection is not worthwhile.

Animals, as a key component of the whole food chain, have a profound impact

on the sustainability of an ecosystem. As we know, every kind of animals plays

an important role in natural balance. For instance, the demise of any species

may at the verge of extinction such as Dodo bird. If people did not take actions

to protect wildlife as soon as possible, we humans would be affected in the

end.

However,there are more issues that we need to foucus in our society rather

than protecting animals. In current social context,

The primary task is still to improve living standards since there are many

people living under the poverty line. Only when people are in a good living

condition,can they pay attention to other social problems. Besides,technology

and educatio are another two aspects for governments to concern. These two

industries accelerate the development of society,which will provide a better

protection for wildlife in turn.

In conclusion,although the animal is a significant part of ecosystem,it is

better for governments to invest more finance and resources in other social

problems.

2015年2月7日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local

people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.

参考范文

Museums and historical sites are the sanctuary where we can acquire

historical knowledge and cultural heritage. However, it has became less

attractive to the local recently. As well as discussing the factors contributing

to this trend, this essay will try to find its solutions.

It is apparent that many local people assume that they are consciously aware

of their cities. And they feel less fresh if they have appreciated such places

ever before. In addition, many museum and sites are chargeable. As a result, the

local prefer to enjoy their leisure time at home rather than in museum or

historical sites.

The inescapable fact is that Museums and historical sites are always the

first option to many tourists. For one thing, they can pay the least spending as

well as enjoy the most local knowledge and scenery. For another thing, the

revenue of museums and historical sites account for the most of local tourism.

Governments are more than pleased to attract tourists to these two places rather

than to the locals. If this situation still continues in the future, there will

be less local vising to the museums and historical sites.

One main solution is to enrich their diversity of activities. Museums can

hold some larruping activities，such as Healthy Lecture and Civil Sporting

Meeting. These activities will not only arouse the enthusiasm of citizens, but

also add some color to this city. Besides, at some degree, lowing the price to

draw more visits is also a feasible solution.

To summarize, tourists will continuously choose museum and historical sites

as their must-visits. However, it is still necessary to take some actions to

maintain the locals’ visiting.

2015年2月12日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the

minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree

or disagree?

绝对类话题，剑9test4有类似题目。可参考剑桥考官范文。

参考范文

It is sometimes argued that increasing the minimum age for unsupervised

driving is the optimal way to ensure road safety. While this proposal seems

feasible, I believe other solutions should be fully considered as well.

On the one hand, I agree that teenage drivers are more likely to have

collisions on the road, compared to drivers in other age groups. This is because

young

drivers,especially those who are in adolescence, tend to overestimate their

driving abilities and underestimate the dangers On the road, For example,

because of behavioural characteristics of youth, adolescents have a weak

awareness Of safety. They are very likely to dlive faster than the speed limit

or mimic those dangerous shots shown in the movie, such as drifting, which can

lead to car accidents on roads.

Nevertheless, apart from Ontrolling legal age strictly, I believe that

other

measures van beIakemto serious injuries. Firstly, the government

might sets higher stand:mls for testing drivers' ability to drive and prolong

the

training time sincebetter prepared drivers and riders can reduce the number

of

incidents. Besides, a right attitude plays a vital role in ensuring the road

safety. For instance, eatiny drinking or talking on the phone while driving

should be prohibited as these activities might distract driver's attention

unexpected

consequences. Finally, for those disqualified drivers, who have serious crash

record retest is a must.

In conclusion, although the lowest legal age can prevent some disqualified

drivers on the road, Other considerations are equally important in tackling this

issue.

2015年2月14日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking.

do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?

参考范文

Since the first mobile phone was invented, this technology has already

changed our lives. However, while it gains its popularity, a lot of criticism

also follow. Personally, I believe that it should not be banned.

We cannot avoid the fact that the mobile phone brings muelveonvenience to our

lives. In the Old times, if we want to contract with a friend in a distant

place, we may write a letter, which will take more half a month before he gets

the letter. But with the help of the mobile phone, we can get the connection

with ourfriends in less than 10 seconds. In addition, the mobile phone is able

to achieve many features, such as shopping buying tickets and so on, which not

only saves our time and spending, but also brings much entertainment.

At the same time, mobile phone industry creates great quantity of

business

opportunities. In past one decade, mobile phones are sold by hundreds, by

thousand, by million and provides unaccountable jobs in the modem world as well.

For example, according to a survey, Samsung has made great contributions to

Korean's GDP. However, the mobile phone also has an effect on our physical and

mental health. As we all known, if weinsistto play digital games on our phones,

we may suffer some eye diseases unless we realise its harmfulness. To make

things Worse, nowadays many people would prefer to spend their time with some

virtual friends rather than keep their families accompanied in reality.

In conclusion, I consider it has more benefits than drawbacks. If the mobile

phone is used at a right place and right time, it still can be put into

excellent usefulness.

2015年2月28日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to

university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh

disadvantages?

分析：这跟剑5当中的题目"In some countries young people are encouraged to

work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting

university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do

this."几乎一模一样。之前有练习过的烤鸭这下真的赚到了!

参考范文

An increasing number of students choose to spend one year travelling or

worklng before going to urffeersity after they graduate from high schools.

Although students can benefit a lot from the experiences in a gap year, it.s

drawbacks cannot be ignored.

On prominent advantage of experiencing a gap year is that it helps students

to accumulate working experience and have a clear perspective Of career

development.High schools emphasise academic development, which often makes

students perplexed whenthey decide to choose a major in university. If an

opportunity can be provided for them to participate in social activities, they

will probably be more certain about their choice of major and work In additiorv

working or traveling contributes to broadening students' horizons and enriching

their life. "Illey need to live independently and communicate with people from

different cultural backgrounds, which is of great value to both their life and

work in the future.

Despite these advantages, this view still cannot be supported by Some parents

and teachers. It is worried that Students will devote too much to work and

travel, and will probably give up their academic development. University is a

place where students can acquire knowledge and skills. If they give up a

bachelor deyee, not only will the academic development be delayed, but also

their career development will be negatively influenced. This is because with

only a high-school deyee, students are less likely to stand out in the

employment market. Some graduates with low degrees have to undertake some jobs

demanding long time and offering low income.

To sum up, taking a gap year before starting university life provides

students good opportunities to know more about themselves and the real world.

However, if they are indulged in travel or work and abandon their academic task,

they might feel regretful soon.

2015年3月12日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area

which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or

disagree?

分析

文章结构：4段

首段：背景句+改写题目+主体段要点

主体段1：the benefits of taking one year off before going to university.

主体段2：the drawbacks of spending-one year travelling or working after finishing

school.

结尾段：重述要点，表明立场

参考范文

With the rapid urbanization of our society, tree seems more valuable than

ever before. At the same time, a great number of people support more greenery in

open areas in towns and cities rather than more housing buildings. I am of the

opinion that this action has more benefits than drawbacks

Trees are an important part of the urban environment and a city with easy

access to green spaces is more livable and attractive for most people. First of

all, as we all know, green plants can carry out photosynthesis, which not only

absorb carbon dioxide, but also release oxygen. Therefore, the air quality in

cities will be improved greatly. Secondly, people living in cities with plenty

of trees are less likely to suffer health problems caused by smog and fumes.

This is extremely important because today travelling by car has become a major

means of travel in most cities.

Housing guarantees people's basic -need of accommodation. Today, many real

estate developers overdevelop the open areas with the purpose of gaining huge

profit. "This will occupy the valuable and limited land resources. In addition,

considering our almost saturated real estate industry and market, there is no

more need to build more housing. In fact, many employers cannot afford to

purchase a flat because of the high housing price. Therefore, compared to

housing building, trees seems more significant to our environment.

To sum up, I believe that planting more trees in open areas will bring far

more gains than losses.

2015年3月14日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for

their children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can

do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

分析

教育类：（新题出现）

两种观点讨论布局图：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

二段：正方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

三段：反方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由

参考范文

Traditionally, toddlers are raised by their relatives such as grandparents in

most countries. However, daycare centers have gained a growing popularity among

working parents in recent years. From my point of view, attending a childcare

center has more benefits.

One obvious argument in favor of daycare centers is that it provides children

with the professional childhood education. This is because a good daycare center

is normally equipped with well-trained staff who can impart different skills,

such as singing, dancing, painting and storytelling, to children through a

variety of activities during the day. In addition to the well-organized,

structured projects, toddlers are provided with more opportunities to socialize

with other peers, which helps them gain confidence and self-consicousness.

However, these opportunities are rare to achieve if they are watched over by

grandparents.

Opponents feel that a relative care is as effective as children center. The

reason for this is that taking care of a child is never an easy task, as

children need constant love and attention. In fact, due to the limited number of

caregivers, children are less likely to get the one-on-one care. By contrast,

relatives, grandparents in particular, have sufficient time to take care of

their beloved grandchildren, which also contributes to the family bond.

I personally believe that no child can become an active and valuable member

of any society without intercommunicating with other peers. Therefore, although

there are conniving arguments for a relative care, it is better to send them

into daycare centers in the childhood period.

2015年3月21日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid

organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities

make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

分析：

题目属于新中等。要求是双边论证并给出自己的观点。也是和之前被疯传的冰桶挑战有点相同。一些人觉得这很好，也有些人觉得这是在作秀，就比如这几天陈光标被爆出他的冰桶挑战其实不是冰水，是温水。

这个题目有很多关键词，famous people，international aid organization, MAKE problems less

important. 很容易跑题，或者举例不恰当.

参考范文：

With the negative influence of famous people’s bad behavior exposing to our

slight more frequently, plenty of citizens begin to doubt their support towards

international aid organizations. However, many people still believe that famous

people are helpers rather problem makers. From my point of view, international

aid organizations can attract more citizens’ attention on problems if

celebrities give the right support and set up good images.

It is sensible to argue that international charity groups can take advantage

of the publicity of celebrities. With the announcement of high-profile figures,

such as famous singers, movie stars and sports professionals, the activities or

campaigns of international organisations can be responded immediately, if they

are endorsed by celebrities. In the early time of this year, ALS Ice Bucket

Challenge spread around the world within a few days by the sharing of many

celebrities. Meanwhile, the organisations also received millions of donation by

fans as well.

Nevertheless, it is an undeniable fact that a small part of celebrities don’t

gain much popularity or bring any convenience to international aid

organizations. Although some celebrities give their support to these

organizations outwardly, they don’t bring any tangible help. For example, some

celebrities lead a luxurious life and never take practical actions to social

problems, or even only take advantage of international aid organizations to

advocate for themselves. As a result, the public will loose confidence to these

organizations, not to mention solving problems.

To sum up, I believe international aid organizations will receive much more

help from celebrities and figure out more problems if celebrities can make the

right choices and their celebrity effect is used appropriately.

2015年3月28日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile

phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skill，do you

agree or disagree?

参考范文

Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the

internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with

this view.

Firstly, the wide use of “Internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the

declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some

grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper

abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to

their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most

companies. Therefore, many linguists have expressed their concerns that the

instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using

formal written English.

Secondly, the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of

technologies as well. Compared to the older generation, young people today are

cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy

access to wifi, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the

latest information of their idols in another country. However, most social

networks deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time

away from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think

independently. In my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as

possible because reading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.

In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much

more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic

performance negatively.

2015年4月11日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger

people. What problems do this cause? And what are the solutions?

参考范文

It is true that a growing number of young adults are faced with increasing

competition from the elderly in the workplace. Although there will undoubtedly

be some negative consequences of this trend, we can take steps to mitigate these

potential problems.

Some related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that more young

employees are likely to suffer unemployment. This is because young employees are

relatively restricted in terms of work experience and communication skills,

compared with those experienced workers. Therefore, employers prefer to recruit

older people with higher working efficiency rather than those who just graduate

from the university. In addition, without a decent job and salary, it is

extremely difficult for young people to make a living and raise their families,

and this poses a threat to social stability since some of them might commit a

crime to make a fast buck.

Personally, I feel that governments and academic institutions should work

hand in hand to tackle this issue. Most elders of retirement age, especially

those living in industrialized countries receive a pension monthly, so there is

no need for them to seek a job. In other words, the government should allocate

more money to pension system, which can basically guarantee the basic needs of

most elders. Besides that, education system should update the curriculum used

currently and design more career-oriented courses for job hunters. By doing

this, young people can become more competitive in the job market.

In conclusion, I am in the camp that more steps can be taken to improve the

wellbeing of the two generations.

2015年4月18日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people think only best students should be rewarded, others think we

should reward students who make progress.

参考范文

It is universally believed that providing students with many rewards is an

effective way to improve academic performance. Although some would argue that

only those top students are eligible to receive these rewards, I am in the camp

that anyone who makes progress should be rewarded as well.

Firstly, advocates believe that it is reasonable to offer prizes to the

high-level performers. This is because one needs to pay a great amount of effort

than other classmates in order to earn a high grade in the exam. In addition,

top performers normally act as a facilitator to encourage other students to work

harder and they can create a competitive learning setting in the school.

However, rewarding top players merely is likely to result in some undesirable

results in some occasions. The reason is that those best students are relatively

few in the class. If we only pay attention to those few high-level learners and

ignore the rest of the students, the enthusiasm for study might be reduced. Some

opponents, therefore, feel that it is necessary for teachers to give certain

awards to those who put forward reasonable efforts in study. The extrinsic

reward provided to them is not only a recognition of their former performance,

but also a motivator for further study since a sense of accomplishment can boost

their confidence and help them become the high-level students eventually.

In conclusion, my view is that both types of students should be rewarded,

which is beneficial for the learning environment in the campus.

2015年4月25日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults

by

authorities . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

参考范文

It is sometimes argued that young lawbreakers should be tried as adults for

crimes. I personally believe that this is partly reasonable.

On the one hand, those who participate in violent crimes should not be

treated differently than adult offenders. This is because most crimes, such as

rape or murder, are thoughtful, deliberate and cunning in its planning and

execution. If our courts trend toward a more lenient position, then the related

laws and punishment will not have a deterring effect on teenagers. As a result,

teenagers are likely to commit horrible crimes since they are aware that they

have legal protection. What’s worse, these teens might recommit after they are

released from jails. In some cases, the lighter sentencing might also lead to

resentment towards the judicial system as victims might argue that these young

offenders do not confess what they have done. This could also result in

insecurity in our society eventually.

On the other hand, the circumstances of a crime and its motivation should be

taken into consideration when it comes to juvenile delinquency. For example,

because of distress and hunger, some teens may turn to stealing food or robbery

during a period of famine. Under this circumstance, harsh punishment, such as

long-term jail might not be the best solution. In my view, most of the young

offenders lack parenting and self-discipline, which would mean that other

alternatives, such as community service and rehabilitation might be better

alternatives for them.

In conclusion, I feel that it is vitally important for judges and state

legislators to ensure the justice equality regardless of the criminal’s age.

2015年5月9日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people

think the solution is that everyone accepts a simpler life, while others believe

that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your

opinion。

参考范文

There is no doubt that modern technology has caused a variety of

environmental issues, both in cities and towns. Ironically, I feel that

technology can address some of these problems but at the same time, personal

effort is a must.

Theoretically, addressing some environmental issues by adopting simple

lifestyles is sensible. According to the statistics, during the last 100 years,

the earth’s surface temperature has risen dramatically because of human

activities. Therefore, some people feel that the changes in our lifestyles can

reverse this worrying trend. For example, the growing number of vehicles on the

road emits a large quantity of green house gases, such as carbon dioxide, which

will worsen the air quality. If residents chose other modes of transport, like

buses or subways, this serious condition would be alleviated to a large extent.

However, in my opinion, this policy would be very unpopular with some people,

especially those living in the suburb, who do need to travel on roads.

While it is undeniable that an individual’s behavior has a profound effect on

the environment, other people argue that the improvement in technology can

tackle some problems in turn. For example, the technology today is available to

produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading

manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more

effective strategy for improving air quality fundamentally.

My own view is that apart from individual effort and environmental friendly

technologies, we need to do more, such as introducing related laws and

regulations. Environmental problems are so complex that each effort should be

combined together to win the battle.

2015年5月16日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage

our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it

will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both

views and give your own opinion.

参考范文

Nowadays, whether evaluating and criticizing teachers should be supported in

the classroom has become a controversial issue. From my perspective, evaluation

and criticism of teachers are necessary for the improvement of education if they

are objective and reasonable.

On the one hand, proposing changes to teachers’ lesson content contributes to

the improvement of teaching quality. Usually, it is difficult for teachers to

realize the mistakes and slips in their teaching unless students remind them.

Additionally, teachers may not clearly know what students have known and want to

know when planning their lessons. If students can put forward their ideas and

suggestions towards the lesson, it will be of great help for teachers to upgrade

the teaching projects. Moreover, trying to evaluate teachers’ lesson is

particularly beneficial for students’ academic and career development in the

future. The modern education emphasizes criticism and innovation. Undoubtedly,

it is an effective way for students to debate or discuss with teachers.

On the other hand, the disruptive students will probably disturb the class

and negatively affect both teaching and learning outcomes. When students voice

their opinions in the classroom, it will be hard to maintain the order and

discipline and the teachers may feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a

loss in terms of knowledge and other learning content. This is because teachers

always devote much to delivering knowledge and explaining theories. If they are

disrupted, the teaching plan may not be able to be fulfilled. As a result, both

teachers and students have to face a loss in the quality of education.

To sum up, it can be recommended that students evaluate and criticize

teachers in the classroom on the premise that they have decent manners without

disturbing the learning atmosphere. Only in this way will teachers and students

achieve a win-win outcome in education.

2015年5月21日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in

life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society

and family life?

参考范文：

In the modern world, young adults prefer to raise children late in their

life. This essay will mainly analyze the potential reasons and how it will

affect society and family life as well.

There are three main factors contributing to the pos官方真题Officialned parenthood. In

general, people who bear great pressure from their work are less likely to

prepare childbirth early, considering that they may have little time to attend

their children. This problem can also be attributed to the high cost of modern

life. The young people without adequate savings will probably be afraid of high

living cost and expensive tuition. Another reason for this is the difficulty in

balancing work and life. More young people emphasize the promotion in career,

and thus spare little time for a stable marriage life which is viewed as a

significant element for rearing children.

It cannot be denied that late childbirth is able to provide more time for

young couples to be ready for the new members in their families. They need to

learn how to raise children before they decide to have children. In addition, if

they delay childbirth, they can provide more economic support for children’s

rearing and education.

However, the low birthrate will cause an increase in ageing population. It is

widely known that most medical needs and costs occur in the last years of life.

Therefore, young people have to face the need to care for the elderly family

members. From the perspective of the society, due to a shift in the age

structure of the workforce, an ageing society with a low birthrate is likely to

encounter labor shortage.

To summarize, the delay in having children is mainly attributed to the

stresses and strains men and women bear in both their life and work. Although

this may help them better prepare for their children’s development, the negative

effects on both society and family life cannot be ignored.

2015年6月6日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their

local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national

and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your

opinion.

参考范文

Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living,

it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the

poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds

of help should be encouraged and respected.

Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems

reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot

of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and

extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our

fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see

the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to

track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in

some cases.

Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that

the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared

with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large

amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas.

Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also

purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money

raised worldwide and save millions children’s life.

In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should

be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it

desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help.

At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for

donors.

2015年6月13日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

As the transportation and accommodation problem increases in big cities, some

governments are encouraging business move from the city to the rural area, do

you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

参考范文

It is sometimes argued that some business should be removed from cities to

rural areas. Personally, I believe this has more benefits than drawbacks.

Firstly, suburbs usually have better surroundings than urban areas. This is

because companies can provide their employees with a better office environment

and living condition there, which would enhance employees’ enthusiasm for work.

In addition, a comfortable office environment and living condition can decrease

frequency of talent-flowing and ensure companies’ development.

Secondly, migrating some business to rural areas will make our cities a

better place to live in. Large factory buildings will cover urban places

extensively. If businesses relocate their factories to rural areas, these places

can be used to build roads, parks, hospitals and other public facilities, and

there might be less traffic jam in the rush hour. At the same time, governments

can plant more greenery to reduce air pollution. As a result, it provides

citizens with better air quality, which is beneficial for their health.

However, we have to admit that this policy still exist some disadvantages.

Although moving some business to rural areas can ease traffic problems, it will

increase the cost of transportation for those who live in the remote areas.

Besides, the ecosystem in rural areas is quite fragile, the over-exploration may

cause irreversible damage to our environment if we fail to provide some

reasonable plans.

In conclusion, I believe that moving some business to rural areas will bring

more advantages.

2015年6月18日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by

teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

分析：

题目的类型属于report。 话题类别属于犯罪与青少年教育。在段落分配上，原因为一段，措施为一段，或者原因及其对应措施为一段。

范文主体思路分析：

原因一：不稳定的家庭因素导致，父母以暴力方式教育孩子给孩子留下不好的影响

对策一：父母改变沟通交流的方式，多和孩子交流互动，更多关心爱护孩子尤其是情绪上的需要

原因二：过度的媒体暴力，孩子们自制力的缺乏容易模仿荧幕里的英雄们的暴力行为

对策二：政府可以建立起荧幕审查与分级制度，控制荧幕上的暴力数量

参考范文

In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has

increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media

violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to

adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below,

followed by solutions.

The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency.

Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and

abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of

the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression

about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real

offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting

at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more

attention and care especially emotional needs.

Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of

youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and

TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack

self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after

watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled

by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship

system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on

screen.

In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile

delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their

children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the

screen.

2015年6月27日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the

causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?

分析：此题虽然看起来像是一道关于社会生活类的新题，但在写作中，依然可以把我们平时练过的关于犯罪类、电视暴力和电子设备利弊的素材运用到此文中。

文章结构：4段

首段：导入话题，概述主题

主体段1：导致人们缺乏安全感的原因一

主体段2：导致人们缺乏安全感的原因二

主体段3：能够让人们感到安全的措施

结尾段：总结上文

参考范文

Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society. Looking

into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from

insecurity. This essay will mainly analyze the reasons for this problem and

provide some solutions.

There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people

feel insecure. In general, the detailed description of violence on the mass

media should be responsible for this problem. When criminal cases such as

shooting, theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV, the

viewers’ safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the

belief that they are likely to subject to offenses at any time. This problem can

also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices. With more

applications installed in people’s smart phones, they save too many secrets on

this device--the online bank passwords and the information of their social

network which may include significant business opportunities. It is not

exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their

precious mobile devices.

To solve this problem, governments, police stations and citizens themselves

should cooperate with each other. First of all, the government should impose a

restriction on the representation of crimes, reducing the plots focusing on the

detailed description. The governments and police stations needs to set up a

security system, through which citizens’ personal information can be prevented

from being stolen. It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the

awareness of security.

As mentioned above, the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the storage

of personal information on mobile devices are the main reasons for insecurity.

Governments, police stations and citizens should make a concerted effort to

address this issue.

2015年7月4日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid

work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks

to the community and the young people?

分析：

题目的类型属于一种观点里的利弊判断。话题类别属于社会与教育。这个问题中提到了两方面，既有young people

也有community，因此，在主体段中最好两方面都要有提及。

范文主体思路分析：

论点：利大于弊

利：

对年轻人：能学到技能，有助于在职场更好地发挥;还能增加对社区的归属感

对社区：能省下一笔钱做更多的事使社区变得更好。

弊：

对年轻人：会占用时间，影响学业

对社区：会面临组织的困难

参考范文

In recent years, it has become more and more common for societies to

encourage young people to do unpaid work in the local community. In my view, the

voluntary participation of youth brings more benefits to young people and

community.

By doing unpaid work, young people can gain experience and exercise skills,

which are helpful for their performance in the future career life. For instance,

when they work with others and interact with people, they can enhance their

abilities of problem solving, communication and teamwork. Also, young people

will feel a sense of belonging to the local community through voluntary work,

building unity and reducing distrust among members of community. To communities,

with the help of young people, they can reduce the financial burden of the

community. If communities employ professional workers to do the same work, a

high cost certainly occurs. But now, local councils can do more in other aspects

like updating sport facilities or supporting disabled people, with the saving

money.

Despite those merits of voluntary work, there are some potential drawbacks.

Unpaid work might occupy a lot of time, which will lead to an obvious decrease

in their learning efficiency in school or workplace. Besides, how to organize

young people to work systematically is still a problem to local communities.

Communities should avoid potential conflicts since these young people come from

different social backgrounds.

From the above discussion, young people should be encouraged to do unpaid

work since community service is good for youngsters’ future career life.

Meanwhile, communities can save money to do something more beneficial to local

community construction. However, there are still some negative points such as

wasting time for young people and hard organization for community.

2015年7月11日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making them

want to be or to look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解

大作文首先一定要搞明白题目的意思，做好Task response。如何做好Task response呢?看题目关键词，discourage,

different, want to be, look the

same.围绕着这些词来思考论点。这个题目没有问你广告的优点or缺点，所以千万不要去写这些，有些同学很兴奋，看到考前看到过的题目，但是没有逐字逐句去挖掘题目的深意，很容易跑题。

观点类的话题，往往只有一个人的观点，它不像discussion类型，把两方观点都清楚告诉你了，所以你还需要做的一件事情是：想想其他人会怎么看，比如：我一拿到这个题目：我会站在disagree的立场，我觉得广告不会让我跟别人看起来一样呀!接下来，我也要想想，会不会真的有些人被广告引导去买跟人家一样的东西呢?如果你做到了这一步，恭喜你，你用了批判性的方式思考了这个题目，这就是辩论当中常说的“心中常存对方辩友”。这道题目对方辩友可能会说，哦，你这个广告做的那么好，大家看了以后都会去买，然后大家都看起来一样了。但你可以退一步说：“不会啊，就算大家可能都会去买iPhone，但是这不是广告的过错，消费者不是傻瓜，他们往往是去了湖滨银泰苹果旗舰店体验了一把后，知道苹果的东西用起来很爽，才愿意买。”

参考范文

It is said that advertising is so influential that it persuade people to

become similar with each other. I believe this statement is a bit

overstated.

First of all, it is unfair to blame advertisements for the popularity of some

certain products amongst consumers. For example, using iPhone and other electric

devices has become

increasingly popular throughout the world, especially in China. What are the

reasons? I think it is because of its good selling points and designs instead of

the commercials. While some might counter that some target consumers are

vulnerable, such as children and teenagers, and they might be persuaded to

purchase similar items, I believe it seldom happens since these days young

people are longing for distinctive appearance and individuality.

Secondly, it is truly less likely for consumers to make similar choices with

the help of commercials. By viewing a variety of advertisements broadcasted on

TV or billboard, people are informed of different choices in terms of prices,

designs and patterns. They might fine-tune their demand first, comparing the

products available on the market, and making wise decisions that satisfy

themselves in the end. By contrast, without the advertisement, consumers have no

access to discover their real needs and find the better choice, which might lead

to uniformity in purchasing decisions.

In conclusion, it is the quality of goods rather than their advertisements

that attracts consumers. As there are so many kinds of commercials, customers

have a wide range of selections, making them become different rather than

identical.

2015年7月23日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities ,

some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers'

money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目讲解

Paragraph 1： 引出背景及双方观点，表明个人立场;

Paragraph 2： 一方观点：政府注重医保问题的必要性以及重要性;

Paragraph 3： 另一方观点：政府更应该把纳税人的钱用于对教育以及其他娱乐公共设施的投资;

Paragraph

4：总结，再次声明个人观点：政府考虑医保问题还是其他领域取决于不同国家的经济情况，如果经济情况良好，那么教育和公共娱乐的投资即是合理的。

参考范文

Where tax payers’ money goes is an issue of broad interest to the general

public. Some people advocate that the government should give the health care the

first priorities, while opponents hold the idea that other fields like education

and public facilities are worth government funding. As far as I’m concerned, the

possibility remains that the opinions can be reconciled and the government can

coordinate budgeting to meet the needs.

Government interference in health-care and medical services is also highly

recommended. Availability of affordable medical service is a mark of the social

and economic development of a country. By providing the needy people with

medical service, a country can inspire the loyally of citizens. People feel

assured living and working in a country where they can be given medical service

when unemployed, sick, injured or retired. By comparison, if they cannot afford

the high cost of visiting the clinic, hospitalization, or buying drugs, they are

less likely to enjoy their living. Social solidarity will eventually suffer.

However, both empirical knowledge and academic research suggest that making

education available throughout a country and eliminating illiteracy can pave the

way for economic development. By receiving education, children from impoverished

families can shake off poverty, climb high in the social ladder and live better

off. Education also allows citizens to secure employment and cam regular income,

thereby maintaining or improving their standard of living. In the hierarchy of

human needs, those needs for food, shelter and health are among the basic. After

these targets are attained, people turn to higher aspirations, entertainment and

recreation. Leisure facilities like stadiums are cinemas satisfy people's needs

in these fields.

To draw a conclusion, the decision to finance health care or other fields

depends on the financial situation of a country. When an economy comes to

maturity, the launch of educational system and recreational entertainment

projects are reasonable.

2015年7月25日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities.

Do you agree or disagree?

分析：今天的题目是新题，但是认真备考过的烤鸭对于此类话题应该不会感到陌生。经济学里有个术语叫CSR,英文全称是Corporate Social

Responsibility,

意思是说企业在创造利润的同时，也要承担起对员工，消费者，社区和环境的责任。那么，我们在针对该题进行头脑风暴时就可以从这几个角度切入。

文章结构：5段

首段：导入话题，表达立场

主体段1：企业承担社会责任有助于缩小贫富差距。

主体段2：企业承担社会责任有助于提高自身形象，获得更多经济利益。

主体段3：在社会问题上的过多付出可能会使企业面临运作和发展问题。

结尾段：总结上文，重申立场。

参考范文

The last years has witnessed the boom of enterprises. Apart from the target

of making profits, the businesses are obliged to solve some social problems.

This will have some positive effects on both our society and the enterprise

itself, although the high cost on social issues may affect its normal

operation.

It is widely acknowledged that the support from enterprises is of great value

to narrow income gaps. Most companies have gained fiscal benefits from various

entrepreneurial activities. However, there are still a large number of families

that cannot afford educational expense and are at disadvantage in terms of

educational opportunities and career development. If they can provide financial

assistance for the students from disadvantaged backgrounds, these students will

probably have a competitive advantage in the job market and land a decent job in

the future.

In addition, when companies make contributions to solving social problems,

there is a possibility that they can bring more profits to themselves in return.

Many successful businesses have good reputations. If they decide to make joint

efforts with other enterprises to help the public raise the awareness of

environmental protection, the corporate image is likely to be improved. As a

result, these businesses will be able to gain more profits in trade

activities.

Admittedly, if enterprises spend too much money tackling social problems such

as improving employees’ social welfare and medical service, the operation and

development may be negatively influenced. More seriously, some companies will

probably have to accept the fact of bankruptcy.

To conclude, businesses have the obligation to shoulder social

responsibilities, which can not only contribute to social stability, but also

enhance their own profits, although it may be difficult for them to balance

social and entrepreneurial benefits sometimes.

2015年8月1日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed

at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these

problems?

题目讲解

题目的类型属于报告类。话题类型属于环境类。在审题中可以看出越来越快速的资源消耗会引起哪些问题和对应的解决方法。如果单讨论环境如何被破坏会偏题。

范文主体思路分析：

问题1：环境问题，由工厂低效率的资源利用率导致

解决1：公司使用环保设备同时政府设立更严格的环保标准规范生产行为

问题2：引起资源短缺，间接地降低人们生活水平

解决2：让人们对节约资源拥有积极态度，倡导低碳生活

参考范文

The universal phenomenon of excessive consumption of natural resources

actually remains a subject of public interest and concern. The objective of this

essay is to outline both the potential problems of this negative tendency and

appropriate ways of dealing with it.

Consuming considerable resources will cause inevitable environmental

pollution. The low efficiency of resources use in factories may aggravate this

problem. One of the best solutions may be encouraging companies to adopt more

eco-friendly equipment, making optimal use of materials. Meanwhile, local

governments can enact stricter environment-protection standards to normalize the

enterprise operations.

In addition, since available natural resources are quite limited on the

earth, the overuse of these restricted resources will worsen the shortage of

natural materials and lower people’s standard of living indirectly. It is

well-recognized that only a few natural resources can be used directly in our

daily life. For example, the drinkable water accounts for just less than 1% of

all the world water resources. Also, to meet the basic needs of people, some

alternative materials have been invented when some resources are in a short

supply. For instance, artificial cotton, a material which is made from rice

straw, has replaced cotton in clothing industry in recent years. However, the

clothes made of artificial cotton are definitely not as comfortable as the

natural ones. Wearing these clothes means a lower life quality to some people to

some extent. To address this problem, people should develop a more active

attitude towards economizing resources, leading a low carbon life.

To summarize, consuming natural resources at an increasing rate may pose a

threat on environment and people’s life. Business, governments and society

should work together to solve these problems.

2015年8月8日雅思写作真题之雅思大作文TASK2

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people

think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger

of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解

解析：今天的题目是新题。题目里有绝对词，一般我们先承认其可取之处，再提出其他的方法。

文章结构：5段

首段：导入话题，表达立场

主体段1：引入背景，引出观点。

主体段2：承认以身说法，比传统课堂更加有说服力。

主体段3：显示生活中学生可能会对罪犯有歧视心理，同时其他方法也能够起到教育作用。

结尾段：总结自己的观点。

参考范文

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic

skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become

law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the

best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other

measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is

because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail

and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the

tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to

the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the

traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real

cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the

irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the

future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration

as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially

those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation

between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in

some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among

youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile

delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help

children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people

who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help

the young generation to become good citizens.

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