雅思写作:1月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文 - 全球化真的有那么“香”吗-

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雅思写作:1月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 全球化真的有那么“香”吗?

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  2021年1月9日 雅思大作文题目

The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase in

globalization produce positive effects to everyone.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

范文及解析

01、Globalization is not a new concept, and it seems to have brought endless

benefits to the nooks and crannies of people's lives via the operation of

雅思写作:1月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文 - 全球化真的有那么“香”吗-

multinational companies. While personally, I am skeptical about this

opinion.

解析

由于题目中出现了“everyone”这一化的表述,故对题目的观点进行否定

nooks and crannies:到处

skeptical:持怀疑态度的

02、The emergence of multinational companies is a striking evidence that

globalization is reaching practically every part of the society. From an

economic perspective, this phenomenon has indeed brought unprecedented dynamism

to each participant, which accelerates the exchange of capital, talents and

technology. Thus, on the one hand, developing countries can acquire more

advanced experience in production and management, thereby promoting the growth

of local industries, and on the other hand, developed ones can boost the

economic efficiency of enterprises to gain immense profits consequently.

解析

作让步,全球化是能够带来产业要素的流动,帮助发展中和发达实现各自的需求;

unprecedented:前所未有的

dynamism:活力

03、However, the disadvantages of this trend are also distinct. One of the

most influential phenomena is the possible occurrence of monopolies in the

economy. Although globalization has led to the prosperity of economic returns,

most of the foregoing economic elements are in the hands of multinational

companies, especially the core technologies that are hardly known to the

outsiders. This may lead to the dominance in a certain field and the lack of

competition for those companies, which is not conducive to the formation of a

sound economic ecology. Besides, environmental pollution is also one of the

repercussions of this change. With large-scale factories set up and cheap labor

force employed, most transnational companies, in order to cut costs, choose to

invest in developing countries to carry out production, and the wastes produced

by such production will largely incur irreversible effects on the local

environment and threaten the health of local people. This is not in conformity

with the course ofsustainable development.

解析

反驳从两个层面入手:一是对经济,特别是发展中的经济会造成不利影响。二是会带来环境污染的问题;

monopoly:垄断

foregoing:前述的

conducive:有利的

ecology: 生态

repercussion:(不良)影响

incur:招致

irreversible:不可逆转的

conformity:遵从

sustainable:可持续的

04、In conclusion, although globalization has brought great convenience to

modern life, I still believe that not everyone can benefit from this trend. The

demerits it brings cannot be ignored.

解析

同样以让步+反驳的形式结尾

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