4月17日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 为什么节假日不再户外活动了?

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Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor

activities like hiking and climbing in natural environment. Why? How to

encourage them to go out?

范文及解析

Introduction

Nowadays, youngsters are reluctant to allocate their spare time to

exercising in open fields. Behind such reluctance are two predominant

motivators, and hopefully some feasible approaches can be adopted.

解析

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开门见山去点题：年轻人不情愿休闲时间出门运动。同时给出自己观点：这种不情愿的背后有两点主要原因，也要可行的应对措施。点到为止，不必在伊始详细地抛出观点。

Ø open fields 旷野

Reasons

To commence, this phenomenon can be ascribed to the unprecedented

technology progresses. Unlike people in the past, who had few options to kill

time and thus opted for outdoor activities as their mainstream of pastimes, the

young at present, exposed to mountains of digital recreations, are more inclined

to get immersed in or even addicted to video games or shows on television which

offer them much immediate excitement. Not surprisingly, young people may find it

dull to exercise outside. Besides, it is due to the rat racein either study or

work that young people should work ceaselessly to accomplish their assignments,

even burning the midnight oil. Naturally, exhausted, they desire a sound rest in

leisure time instead of doing outdoor activities which further drain their

physical strength.

解析

Ø 两点原因：科技发展，年轻人更容易被追剧或玩游戏所吸引;平日工作或学业繁忙，闲暇时刻更想”瘫着”。

Ø be ascribed to 归因于

Ø unprecedented adj. 空前的

Ø pastime n. 消遣方式

Ø rat race 激烈的竞争

Ø drain vt. 耗尽;排干

Solutions

Considering the repercussions incurred by this lifestyle, two schemes can

be put on the agenda. The first imperative is that some public-service

advertisements can be made to publicize not only the detriments brought by the

addiction to digital devices but also the essence of taking a stroll in a

natural environment. Fostering the awareness of leading a healthier life, young

people may to large extent alter their current lifestyle. Additionally,

educational institutions and businesses can on a regular basis arrange several

outdoor activities such as excursions and mountain-climbing on weekends, during

which students and youngworking professionals will be called on to smell the

roses.

解析

Ø 解决办法与原因可一一对应：通过公益广告宣传使年轻人意识到问题严重性，让他们主动减少电子产品的使用;学校或公司定期组织户外活动。

Ø repercussion n. (常以复数形式出现)[尤指不好的]后果

Ø imperative adj. 迫切的

Ø excursion n. 远足

Ø working professional n. 上班族

Ø smell the roses 享受生活[尤指亲近自然]

Conclusion

In a nutshell, since possible factors and workable remedies have been

clarified, thisthorny issue can be promisingly addressed through joint efforts

from several parties.

解析

Ø 一句话总结：各方通力合作，问题就能被解决。

Ø remedy n. 纠正方法

Ø thorny adj. 棘手的