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Task：In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by

teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Sample answer：

In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has

increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media

violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to

adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below,

followed by solutions.

The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency.

Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and

abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of

the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression

about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real

offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting

at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more

attention and care especially emotional needs.

Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of

youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and

TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack

self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after

watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled

by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship

system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on

screen.

In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile

delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their

children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the

screen.

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