雅思写作教育类高分范文 | 每个人都应该上学到18岁

北京雅思培训,雅思备考资料,雅思网课,雅思培训机构,雅思保分班,雅思真题,雅思课程

Everybody should stay at school until 18 years old. To what extent do you

agree or disagree?每个人上学都应该至少到18岁。你在何种程度上同意或者不同意这个观点?

To compete in a global economy young people are expected to be highly

educated. Governments in some countries therebefore have implemented or planned

to enforce the laws about raising the school leaving age. This movement gives

rise to much controversy in the community. In this essay, we will discuss some

arguments for and against studying until the age of eighteen.

The proposal would help tackle the problem of teenagers leaving education

without qualifications or workplace skills. It is not strictly about increasing

the 'school' leaving age, but about keeping teens in some kind of education or

training until they are 18, most of them full-time, including apprenticeships

and work-based training. Especially in this competitive society, obtaining

certain qualifications or pursuing higher education is an inevitable trend. If

you left school a decade ago with an age under 18 there were loads of jobs you

could walk into without qualifications, however that's not going to be the case

now and in the future. This fast-changing world needs more professionals to

support and develop, and normally students can only be qualified when they

finished high school or technical school while reaching 18.

Some people, on the other hand, argue that there is no reason to force all 16

year olds to stay in school longer than they need to be there. By the age of

sixteen, some students have a strong sense of who they are and what they want to

become. Forcing these confident young people to "stay in school" until they turn

18 could actually be deterring them from achieving their career and life

goals.

In my opinion of view, these so called confident young people under 18 are

rare and it is still beneficial for them to receive training for their career

preparation. The modern education system cannot afford to neglect those

teenagers who currently leave school at 16 unprepared for the rigor and demands

of life in the 21st Century.

以上内容来自我预测你高分，如有任何问题，请联系易伯华删除。